Hi Kris,
Well, I commented on the other church thread, so I'd better for you too
On this; given there is some convergence of verticals that I agree with Donald, it would be unwise to mess with too much, it is tricky to decide what should be vertical. For me, I'd go by the two apex's of the gothic windows on the tower.
Definitely better without the power pole and transformer, but we're still left with the perplexing cross, which seems to be on the hillside. I guess if it is, and it is a local 'defining landmark', it should stay.
Very nice exposure.
Cheers,