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[Egyptian Face]

Please leave your first impression (negative or positive) i wanna learn
Thank u so much

[FrankMi]

Hi Sara, my first impression is that it is colourful, which I like, but excessively busy, out of focus, and is lacking a subject so there is no place where my eye can come to rest.

If composition is your goal, you may want to search the Web for articles on Photography Composition to give you a place to start. Here is a fairly basic introduction to what makes an interesting composition. http://www.photographymad.com/pages/...position-rules

[Geoff F]

Just a personal thought, Sara, but with this sort of scene I usually prefer to have the sharpest area of focus near the foreground; then gradually becoming more blurred behind.

That just seems to look more natural to me.

[Teton Chuck]

Sara, I agree with Frank. I like the color, but your picture would be more interesting if you had greater depth of focus. This might be a good image to experiment to get greater depth of field.

[Egyptian Face]

Hi Sara, my first impression is that it is colourful, which I like, but excessively busy, out of focus, and is lacking a subject so there is no place where my eye can come to rest.

If composition is your goal, you may want to search the Web for articles on Photography Composition to give you a place to start. Here is a fairly basic introduction to what makes an interesting composition. http://www.photographymad.com/pages/...position-rules

Thank u sooo much Frank for your comment ... yes i do understand about the composition rules .... in real i was thinking about doing an abstract photo ... it seems that i failed
this wool scarf (i made it by myself) i tried to focus on the different colors only and a tiny part of the wool itself ... but i am convinced that it is mostly out of focus.

I will shoot this one again ... and i will post it soon

Thank u so much again Frank

[Egyptian Face]

Just a personal thought, Sara, but with this sort of scene I usually prefer to have the sharpest area of focus near the foreground; then gradually becoming more blurred behind.

That just seems to look more natural to me.

I am totally convinced i will shoot it again and post it soon
Thank u so much Geoff

[Egyptian Face]

Sara, I agree with Frank. I like the color, but your picture would be more interesting if you had greater depth of focus. This might be a good image to experiment to get greater depth of field.

Okay Chuck ... i will shoot it again and do my best regarding the depth of field
Thank u soo much Chuck