Mission accomplished - I can't think of anything that would improve on what you're trying to achieve.
my eye was immediately drawn to the light on her left lower jawline...therefore, while it is a needed fill, I think I might tend to lower it's value by one to one half stop. Other than little bit of bother, I'd leave a near-perfectly lit shot alone.
Hi Mark, excellent shot! I really like it.
What focal length was used here?
Did you blur her hair PP? I guess since you were going for a less feminine look that is OK?
These are not criticisms, they are inquiries to understand a very good shot.
Thanks for posting!
Mark,
What did you mean by masculine feel? Couldn't that have been accomplished through the model rather than props? They, the props, look a bit too clean to convey a ruggedness I think.