Wet Grass

[mammarazzi]

My Great Niece Olivia having problems with wet grass!

[Donald]

Joanne

That is a very well captured image. The 'story' in the image is attractive and has humour. The technical aspects of the capture (focus, exposure) are good.

What I do wonder, though, is whether her dress is too close in tonal value to the grass? The reason I say that is that the head, arms, legs all 'pop' out from the background, but I feel the dress is blending a bit into that background. Is it maybe because she's also very centrally placed in the frame? If you were able re-crop and have slightly less grass behind her and more in front, that might work in its favour.