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9th November 2011, 08:08 AM
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a flower of "curazao"
Another question is it good or bad?
How is the composition:
too heavy on the left side?
Catalina
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9th November 2011, 10:09 AM
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Re: a flower of "curazao"
Hi Catalina, Lovey colour, I like the image, I would be tempted to crop the dark part from the top of the frame, and the bigger branch from the bottom, and a little from the right side, this would bring the focus more on the flower bloom.
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9th November 2011, 10:33 AM
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Re: a flower of "curazao"
Hi Catalina,
The background is a little blown for my taste. Maybe re-shooting it with a darker background. It would make the color pop more.
I like the texture of the branch on the right, and agree with a tighter crop to loose the top darker area and the bottom branch.
Here is my try, tighter crop, a little sharpening and an over all burn to darken the colors. I still think the almost white background detracts from the flowers a great deal.
I have been experimenting with the post production part and still have much to learn. Hopefully, some others will chime in as well.
Hope this helps.
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9th November 2011, 02:26 PM
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Re: a flower of "curazao"
Thank you for your comments and for post production.
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