Peter
The first thing that hit me was that, in #1 and #2, you have signficant light fall-off on the people at either end of the group. I see you have used a pretty heavy vignette. Maybe these need a bit of work so that the light on the skin is the same on those people as those inside them in the line-ups.
Donald,
Thanks for you comment. They are quiet dark round the edges but these are straight out of Hipstamatic on my iPhone, all I've done is resized and slightly sharpened them. I quite like the grungy, old fashioned effect they have. I may post some shot with the 5D later, much more conventional.
Peter
Peter,
Is that vignette being caused by a case/cover on the phone? I have seen these phones create that effect before.
Was No 3 shot through a window/glass?
Peter, interesting, rather like the different effects that creates. Must try an ultra slow shutter speed and bubbles next time the opportunity arises.