Four Blossoms

[FrankMi]

First I want to thank all of those that offered suggestions and comments last time I posted photographs of this flower.

The buds are very delicate and tend to fall off if you breathe on them. Finally, new blossoms opened and I am trying again to see if I can finally 'get it right'.

Thank you for looking. Comments and criticisms are warmly welcomed. After all, how else would I know what needs to be improved?



Odd. Now that its posted it looks a bit dark on my monitor... hmmmm...

[Katy Noelle]

Hi, Frank! It seems that you are taking a well executed photograph (as in exposure, clarity, dof, etc.) but it's lacking artistic "pop", I think. Hope you don't mind me saying it. Why not try it against a white background? or, possibly, a pretty blue would be thrilling - red, white and blue is always gorgeous. In other words, what do you think about this flower? Is it bold, soft, cheery? Put something behind it that will communicate that and complement the flower.

As for it being too dark... I'm very bleary eyed, at the moment, and can't really tell - sorry!

[FrankMi]

Hi Katy, I'll give that a try. Thank you for commenting!