Completely the opposite, as proven by your revision. The revised version solves all of the issues mentioned in the thread and does so very tastefully.
The only issue now is that your revision introduced a bright halo in the background of the uppermost rock formation. Get rid of that halo and you've got a superb wall-hanger.

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LOL!!!!! So believe me, all comments are helpful on this site, good or bad everything helps to better one as a photographer.
Seriously, I can't imagine anyone guessing that you've been doing this stuff for only a year. Really amazing!

