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    Mix of elements

    I combined different element in this picture: sea, building, sky; they are in different quadrant.

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    Re: Mix of elements

    Javier

    A very geometric concept. However, I think a weakness is the sky. In my view, ityjust does not have enough detail/interest in it to support the rest of the image. In fact if I scroll down the page until everything is off the page and the top of the image appears just above the tallest building, I think you have a stronger image.

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    Re: Mix of elements

    Quote Originally Posted by Donald View Post
    Javier

    A very geometric concept. However, I think a weakness is the sky. In my view, ityjust does not have enough detail/interest in it to support the rest of the image. In fact if I scroll down the page until everything is off the page and the top of the image appears just above the tallest building, I think you have a stronger image.
    Mix of elements

    This new version feels more balance; thank you.

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    Re: Mix of elements

    I agree - that cropped version is much more pleasing. The diagonal line caused by the water/beach (though broken) provides a very nice split between the two main subjects in this version.

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