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    Re: The lamp is bent

    Hi Fernando,

    I normally really like your work but this one does not work for me. I can see where you are going with this but the very large amount of black in the foreground is distracting. My eye is drawn away from the rider and the lamp and on to the bright spot in the dark shadow. If the shadow was not there and we had a textured cobbled foreground and could see the ride in full it would work much better. I would be concentrating on the rider and lamp.

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