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    Stobrec - as the sun goes down

    Walking home this shot captured my attention.

    Sadly the dark spot has not been completely eliminated,
    and sadly the camera was set to very small photo files, which I discovered when we got home!~!

    Stobrec - as the sun goes down

    C&C welcome, to help me with future shots.

    Suggestion was to crop it and take out the jet trail.
    What do you think?

    Stobrec - as the sun goes down
    Last edited by rawill; 31st January 2013 at 09:05 PM.

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    Re: Stobrec - as the sun goes down

    I think I would try cropping a fraction from the top and left side.

    And remove the aircraft trail.

    Otherwise, it looks OK to me.

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    Re: Stobrec - as the sun goes down

    Good point about the cropping.

    And I left the aircraft trail in there to see what others thought.
    I was more concerned about getting the dark spot out.

    Done, tell me what you think, an improvement or not, I think so.

    BUT, when I look at the first one, I am immediately drawn to the skyscape.

    In the second that does not happen the same.
    Last edited by rawill; 31st January 2013 at 09:07 PM.

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