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    On the Beach

    Working on some of the images that I took in Iceland last month. Came across this one, thinking of submitting it into a photo competition, the deadline to submit images is in the next two weeks. So I am look for C&C on the compostion, and the image in general.

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    Re: On the Beach

    Enter it. It's super.

    One thing I'd suggest is clone out that little straight darker mark (is it a splash of water) that I've circled. It does catch the eye. I also wondered about a soft vignette - nothing too obvious or aggressive.

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    What a fantastic shot - real nice. Only other adjustment I would make is to put some lighter 'specs' in the solid black chunk sticking up and the other sticking out on the left (camera left) side of the ice; being solid black makes those two pieces stand out a bit much as-is (of course could also be the res. / quality of the posted image or my display).

    Good luck in the competition!

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    Re: On the Beach

    Donald: thanks for spoting that little vertical splash of water, didn't see it, afterwards found a dust bunnie, Robert took your advice and put a little bit of as you say "specs" into that little chunk to add a little comtrast to the black. Thanks you both for your input.

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    Allan

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