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9th July 2009, 07:41 PM
11th July 2009, 12:29 AM
Re: San Clemente Pier
I can see the a-track-tion
You've got a perfect crop/composition with the near rail going into the bottom right corner like that.
Two things detract for me;
the sloping and slightly barrelled pier and horizon across the top (as you say), and
the sunlit rocks in front of the bush in right of frame; a bit of PP burning could take those down.
You're also right about the bush, it is a little over-powering, a bit more sea space between the top of it and the pier would have been better.
The "permanent way" looks well looked after!