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10th October 2016, 07:04 PM
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Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
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10th October 2016, 07:19 PM
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Re: Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
Nice colours John, great light angle showing the texture of the wings too.
Given the need to leave the framing as it is for the centre of the flower, I think I would actually give this a little more space top and right.
Being really picky, it would have benefited from f/11 or f/16, you're only at 100 iso on a 5D Mk.IV, so should be plenty ISO available without encountering noise.
HTH, Dave
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10th October 2016, 07:52 PM
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Re: Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
Thank you for your feedback, Dave. I agree with your comments on the composition, unfortunately, I do have any room on the right side of the frame - user error in composition (I could try to expand the right side in Photoshop - making up the pixels). f/11 or f/16 would have given me a bit more DOF to bring the flower and last bit of the tail into focus - I was hand-holding the camera and was trading off aperture for shutter speed (should have bumped the ISO up some). Just got this camera, so I am having some fun learning the bells and whistles.
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10th October 2016, 08:04 PM
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Re: Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
Super cute
Carvings on the stone surface like a butterfly
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10th October 2016, 08:56 PM
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Re: Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
Fabulous detail and fantastic colour I just love it.
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10th October 2016, 09:18 PM
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Re: Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
A real nice image there, John
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10th October 2016, 11:57 PM
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Re: Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
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11th October 2016, 01:56 AM
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Re: Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
Thank you for your comments, Vaez, Maurice, Gary, John
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11th October 2016, 06:02 AM
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Re: Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
I do play on the dark side... would you consider toning down the petals just a touch?
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11th October 2016, 08:00 AM
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Re: Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
That's a nice shot as it stands John. Colourful flowers always distract and when the subject is grey to boot, I guess it's bound to be a slight problem. You could crop it a bit more tightly. That would have the benefit of removing the additional distraction of the centre of the bloom and that small white patch below it. Something like:
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11th October 2016, 11:42 AM
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Re: Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
I appreciate your comments and suggestions, Brian and John - thank you.
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11th October 2016, 05:04 PM
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Re: Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
IMO John's edit improved the image. Very nice colors and details
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11th October 2016, 08:02 PM
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Re: Gray Hairstreak Butterfly
I agree with John's (2) cropping too, John. Very pretty butterfly, concrete colour...I have not seen one of this before.
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