rice field

[vaez]

i took these photo of my rice farm father i hope these photo of his hard work appreciated .im a bokeh shot but if i did not succeed i read an article (121click)and need a good tool.
c&c welcome and appreciated .in your opinion which one is better?
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[Otavio]

Hello, mate!

You can be proud of your father's work! It appears he is having nice results. My choice is #2, for the colours. If possible, I would reshoot it, framing only the foreground rice branch and avoiding the one in the back. Anyway, it is a very nice image in my opinion. The bokeh is nice and works well here.

Well done (you and your father ).

Cheers,

[vaez]

Hello, mate!

You can be proud of your father's work! It appears he is having nice results. My choice is #2, for the colours. If possible, I would reshoot it, framing only the foreground rice branch and avoiding the one in the back. Anyway, it is a very nice image in my opinion. The bokeh is nice and works well here.

Well done (you and your father ).

Cheers,

hello otavio
glad to see you on the site and this pic is about a month ago and now the harvest home .
perhaps because of the drought is the last time any way thanks for comment and suggestion
cheers vaez

[Otavio]

Ok. Even so, I still think it is the best of the set. (#2). Cheers,

[vaez]

Ok. Even so, I still think it is the best of the set. (#2). Cheers,

again thank you so much

[truonda]

My pick would also be #2. Great stuff, vaez!

[vaez]

My pick would also be #2. Great stuff, vaez!

thank you daniel for comment

[Shadowman]

Nice series.

[Mike Buckley]

Each image has something really strong to like. My personal favorite is #5 because its simplicity works so well and in my mind has no weakness.

It's clear that you have given so much thought to all of themm so I'll go into a couple details on the others:

#1: Great composition except for the out-of-focus leaf in the middle. Get rid of that and the image improves 100%.
#2: I love the symmetry of the two stalks (that may not be the proper term). I wish all of the rice buds (also perhaps not the proper term) in the upper stalk were in focus.
#3: The out-of-focus leaves in the background are glorious. The focused leaf in the foreground competes with the rice making me wonder which is the subject.
#4: Wonderful color and composition. I wish also in this one that all of the rice buds were in focus.
#6: Great framing of the subject. The busy background and the small leaf sticking up from the bottom of the frame in the middle make this image my least favorite of the bunch.

[Stagecoach]

Great work Vaez, it's No 4 for me.

[IzzieK]

All very nice, Vaez...the article you read telling you that you need a specialized tool to be able to achieve bokeh is quite deceiving...You've done perfectly what you want to achieve here, specially in #2 and #5, in all of them really but #2 and #5 are ispecial because of the colour melding and matching one another. By the look of your shots here, It looks like that your dad did a very good job taking care of your crops this year...I hope you have got a good harvest for many more years to come...

[vaez]

Each image has something really strong to like. My personal favorite is #5 because its simplicity works so well and in my mind has no weakness.

It's clear that you have given so much thought to all of themm so I'll go into a couple details on the others:

#1: Great composition except for the out-of-focus leaf in the middle. Get rid of that and the image improves 100%.
#2: I love the symmetry of the two stalks (that may not be the proper term). I wish all of the rice buds (also perhaps not the proper term) in the upper stalk were in focus.
#3: The out-of-focus leaves in the background are glorious. The focused leaf in the foreground competes with the rice making me wonder which is the subject.
#4: Wonderful color and composition. I wish also in this one that all of the rice buds were in focus.
#6: Great framing of the subject. The busy background and the small leaf sticking up from the bottom of the frame in the middle make this image my least favorite of the bunch.

hello mike thank you for your detailed explaintions mauration.
very nu=ice that you have referred to any number of weaknesses positive . i wanted a shot bokeh i thought that if any part of the photo as the background is out of focus then added with special software bokeh circles
your very kind of you taking time to answer me
cheers vaez

[vaez]

Each image has something really strong to like. My personal favorite is #5 because its simplicity works so well and in my mind has no weakness.

It's clear that you have given so much thought to all of themm so I'll go into a couple details on the others:

#1: Great composition except for the out-of-focus leaf in the middle. Get rid of that and the image improves 100%.
#2: I love the symmetry of the two stalks (that may not be the proper term). I wish all of the rice buds (also perhaps not the proper term) in the upper stalk were in focus.
#3: The out-of-focus leaves in the background are glorious. The focused leaf in the foreground competes with the rice making me wonder which is the subject.
#4: Wonderful color and composition. I wish also in this one that all of the rice buds were in focus.
#6: Great framing of the subject. The busy background and the small leaf sticking up from the bottom of the frame in the middle make this image my least favorite of the bunch.

hello mike thank you for your detailed explaintions mauration.
very nu=ice that you have referred to any number of weaknesses positive . i wanted a shot bokeh i thought that if any part of the photo as the background is out of focus then added with special software bokeh circles
your very kind of you taking time to answer me
cheers vaez

[vaez]

[QUOTE=IzzieK;458749]All very nice, Vaez...the article you read telling you that you need a specialized tool to be able to achieve bokeh is quite deceiving...You've done perfectly what you want to achieve here, specially in #2 and #5, in all of them really but #2 and #5 are ispecial because of the colour melding and matching one another. By the look of your shots here, It looks like that your dad did a very good job taking care of your crops this year...I hope you have got a good harvest for many more years to come...[/
hello izzie your valuable comment i hope that God is always with you
cheers vaez

[vaez]

Great work Vaez, it's No 4 for me.

thank you for comment Graham

[bnnrcn]

Hi Vaez, I like the light ,composition and colors in #4

[IzzieK]

hello izzie your valuable comment i hope that God is always with you
cheers vaez

Why thank you, Vaez...that is a very nice of you to say this...

[vaez]

Hi Vaez, I like the light ,composition and colors in #4

thanks for comment and me too but branch is not sharp

[FrankMi]

Hi Vaez, for me, #3 embodies what I would think that rice would look like. It is captivating in its simplicity. I have seen pictures of rice patties but never the individual stalks. Thank you so much for posting this interesting and informative set of images.

Someone once told me that rice is the perfect food when you are craving about 2,000 of something to eat!

[vaez]

Hi Vaez, for me, #3 embodies what I would think that rice would look like. It is captivating in its simplicity. I have seen pictures of rice patties but never the individual stalks. Thank you so much for posting this interesting and informative set of images.

Someone once told me that rice is the perfect food when you are craving about 2,000 of something to eat!

اhello miller
thank you for attention and your choice the text written on rice was interesting wheat is the staple food after rice in my country
it is impossible not to find at restaurants rice it is the main food and very delicious special of my farm father
cheers