AB..I think this is too head on...I do not like the angle of the shot either -- I think you went too low that you can see the other side of his brain through his nose...I don't know how to explain this better...I am sorry. I just wanted you to know how I think about this one...I am no expert by any means though so take this as a grain of salt.
Ilike the babyDotted BG is distracting.