
Originally Posted by
Davey
looking good for the first go especially. I did notice the left being darker than the right, for uniform lighting (albeit not clothing) I find lights either side slightly back pointed slightly forwards and pop up reflector (or foam core, card, sheet etc) in front to bounce back and fill gives you even light but with enough shadow to accentuate shapes. Sort of 5 bands of light dark light dark light from left to right across the subject if it makes sense.
When you get used to it you could start tweaking small things like use the edge of the light spill/feather it to give more control. I mainly use 300ws lencarta ultras monoblocks (occasionally 600) and find they are more than enough indoors in smaller spaces as you've found. Moving lights further out isn't possible like you say but if you ever get chance remember the falloff decreases since distance increases so you'll get more even light, but you'll need to turn it up to get same intensity as close in obviously.
edit: and for print on dark background for dark page (doubt it in this case but mention in case) you can pop the speedlights in the back to rim light and give separation from dark background. I sometimes use them on light backgrounds to brighten or gelled to colour it, always an option when you can't get the white bright enough behind to make cutout in post more time consuming to bring it up with your speedlights.