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    Watching photographer

    For your review

    cheers

    Thierry

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    Re: Watching photographer

    As I saw it, it needed more definition in the eye and less glare on the forehead - sooooooooooo, I did some selective burning, a little clone work, and added a transparent layer with a thin gray overlay to the forehead, just to knock down that value because, even at 100% on a burn layer, it wouldn't detail out.

    I'm wondering if a little closer up might convey the title more.

    Compostionally, it is well defined with a good diagonal and a nice gray scale. I've never seen anything abruptly wrong with your composition and for the most part, I think your attention to pose, detail and action are quite superb.

    Watching photographer

    The difference is barely noticeable at this 96dpi level, but it is enough to see the slight editing I did.

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    Re: Watching photographer

    Thanks for your comment Chris. Your post p^rocessing highlight the reflect in the eye. Compared to the title you are right I could be a little bit closer

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