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    Re: Aquinnah Lighthouse

    Nicely done.

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    Re: Aquinnah Lighthouse

    Really beautiful; pleasing colours ; somehow i feel a bit more sky is needed; presently i feel sky is pressing down, a bit

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    Re: Aquinnah Lighthouse

    Maybe a fraction less foreground would achieve the same result. But that would cause a problem if it also required losing a bit from the sides to retain this current size ratio.

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    Re: Aquinnah Lighthouse

    Thanks all for the suggestions for improvement, appreciated.

    This really is a nice location on Martha's Vineyard.

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    Re: Aquinnah Lighthouse

    The shot is nice enough, as per some of the other comments, but I do wonder about the title. The headland seems to be what this shot is all about and the lighthouse almost seems to be more of an afterthought in the composition. If the shot is about the lighthouse, should it not be the most prominent part of your image?

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    Re: Aquinnah Lighthouse

    Quote Originally Posted by Manfred M View Post
    The shot is nice enough, as per some of the other comments, but I do wonder about the title. The headland seems to be what this shot is all about and the lighthouse almost seems to be more of an afterthought in the composition. If the shot is about the lighthouse, should it not be the most prominent part of your image?
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    Re: Aquinnah Lighthouse

    There is no question regarding the subject in this shot.

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    Re: Aquinnah Lighthouse

    This trimmed one much appealing

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    That second image has some nice subtle tints and nicely focused.

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