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    The passion

    Got this shot at a match a few weeks ago.
    Comments very welcome.
    Thanks, Maurice.

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    Re: The passion

    A bit tight on the crop at bottom, as a whole not very interesting; if you were to crop each gent you'd have the making of a good sports card.

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    Re: The passion

    Nice shot. Applying a vignette might help with the brightly clothed spectators st top.

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    Re: The passion

    As John mentioned, a pity you didn't get their toes into the frame.

    Maybe I would simply try to selectively tone down the background highlights just a fraction.

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    Re: The passion

    Great colors and background that tells the story of the entire scene. To emphasize the story about the two athletes glaring at each other, consider applying a vignette that darkens everything except those two players.

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    Re: The passion

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    A bit tight on the crop at bottom, as a whole not very interesting; if you were to crop each gent you'd have the making of a good sports card.
    John, thanks for comments and advice.
    Maurice.

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    Re: The passion

    Quote Originally Posted by NorthernFocus View Post
    Nice shot. Applying a vignette might help with the brightly clothed spectators st top.
    Dan, thanks, will try a vignette.
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    Re: The passion

    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    As John mentioned, a pity you didn't get their toes into the frame.

    Maybe I would simply try to selectively tone down the background highlights just a fraction.
    Groff, thanks for advice.
    Maurice.

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    Re: The passion

    Quote Originally Posted by Mike Buckley View Post
    Great colors and background that tells the story of the entire scene. To emphasize the story about the two athletes glaring at each other, consider applying a vignette that darkens everything except those two players.
    Mike, thanks for advice. Your take on the shot is very interesting.
    Maurice.

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    The passion
    Last edited by Dave Humphries; 1st October 2016 at 12:51 PM.

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    Re: The passion

    That's the idea I had, Maurice.

    However, if I had taken this image and if I wanted to make the final product consistent with the theme, Passion, as indicated by the title of your thread, I would use the version shown below. I would also take the time to desaturate the background area, especially the people in the upper area of the background, just a bit to ensure that the two primary subjects stand out from the rest of the image even more.



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    Re: The passion

    Quote Originally Posted by Mike Buckley View Post
    That's the idea I had, Maurice.

    However, if I had taken this image and if I wanted to make the final product consistent with the theme, Passion, as indicated by the title of your thread, I would use the version shown below. I would also take the time to desaturate the background area, especially the people in the upper area of the background, just a bit to ensure that the two primary subjects stand out from the rest of the image even more.



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    Mike, + 1 to you . I have a lot to learn. Thanks again.
    Maurice.

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