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Thread: Sailing off into the sunset.
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26th August 2016, 12:31 PM #1
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Sailing off into the sunset.
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26th August 2016, 01:17 PM #2
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Re: Sailing off into the sunset.
Hi Richard. I would crop about half of the water in #1 and may be I would brigthen the ship just a bit selectively if the image was mine
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26th August 2016, 02:11 PM #3
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Re: Sailing off into the sunset.
I really liked the second one; but don't know why, the first one appears too static
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26th August 2016, 07:47 PM #4
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Re: Sailing off into the sunset.
A little from the bottom and left side, as Binnur suggested, and that ship will appear to be moving much faster.
I like seeing the person and dog in the second scene.
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27th August 2016, 01:53 AM #5
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Re: Sailing off into the sunset.
I like the minimalism of the first shot, Richard. I would crop a little off the bottom to remove the black line along the border of the frame.
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27th August 2016, 08:49 AM #6
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Re: Sailing off into the sunset.
I noticed the existence of the dog and the person after reading Geoff's comment. IMO they might add to the scene if they were more visible
Originally Posted by Geoff F
A little from the bottom and left side, as Binnur suggested, and that ship will appear to be moving much faster.
I like seeing the person and dog in the second scene.
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