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    The Fear of What's Below

    The Fear of What's Below

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    Re: The Fear of What's Below

    I like it. The light at the bottom is a nice balance. The top corners need a bit of extra exposure, maybe. That is only my opinion.
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    Re: The Fear of What's Below

    The texture and lines work well for me. Consider cropping at the bottom in between the two cracks in the floor.

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    Re: The Fear of What's Below

    Quote Originally Posted by Mike Buckley View Post
    The texture and lines work well for me. Consider cropping at the bottom in between the two cracks in the floor.
    +1 one to this

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    Re: The Fear of What's Below

    Nice image; well captioned

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    Re: The Fear of What's Below

    perhaps a little moodier?

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    Re: The Fear of What's Below

    Nice, I don't get the feeling of fear though, too brightly lit to suggest fear.

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    Re: The Fear of What's Below

    another +1 to Mike's comment. When I first saw it, there wasn't those extra steps...

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    Re: The Fear of What's Below

    If you follow Mike's suggestion the stairs will appear a bit more precipitous; and then dim the light at the bottom and to make it a bit more 'fearful'.

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    Re: The Fear of What's Below

    +1 to Mikes comment and I might even think about cutting out a bit further towards the stairs.

    I always find these old passageways so interesting, especially when they have been fit with modern amenities like hand rails and electric lights.

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