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    Passing through a bridge

    C&C are welcome

    Passing through a bridgeIMG_1809 by patel_tejal, on Flickr

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    Re: Passing through a bridge

    If it were mine I think I would have cloned out the light poles. My eye wants to go right to them.

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    Re: Passing through a bridge

    Quote Originally Posted by mknittle View Post
    If it were mine I think I would have cloned out the light poles. My eye wants to go right to them.
    Good suggestion Mark.. (y). Thank you.

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    Re: Passing through a bridge

    A good scene well photographed. Possibly the boat in the bottom right corner is fractionally tight to the edge, but not a serious issue. And I see a few very small over bright highlights scattered around the bridge which I would selectively tone down a little.

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    Re: Passing through a bridge

    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    A good scene well photographed. Possibly the boat in the bottom right corner is fractionally tight to the edge, but not a serious issue. And I see a few very small over bright highlights scattered around the bridge which I would selectively tone down a little.
    Thanks for your feedback. I will try to re-process the picture considering your inputs.

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    Re: Passing through a bridge

    Nice capture.

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    Re: Passing through a bridge

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nice capture.
    Thanks John

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    Re: Passing through a bridge

    Tejal - This is a very nice shot; not exciting but still quite pleasant to look at.

    Let me ask you what the subject of this image is and let me give you a thought as to how to answer the question. Which of the two versions is the stronger image?


    Passing through a bridge


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    Passing through a bridge


    I think you have two different images here, and each tells its own story, and the two stories are quite different. Which one are you trying to tell?

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    Re: Passing through a bridge

    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    Tejal - This is a very nice shot; not exciting but still quite pleasant to look at.

    Let me ask you what the subject of this image is and let me give you a thought as to how to answer the question. Which of the two versions is the stronger image?


    Passing through a bridge


    OR



    Passing through a bridge


    I think you have two different images here, and each tells its own story, and the two stories are quite different. Which one are you trying to tell?
    Honestly speaking I have noticed both things while clicking the picture, but I found the pillars more attracted. I liked the flow from the place i was standing on the river bank.

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    Re: Passing through a bridge

    i dont comment a lot on others work, simply because i have no creditability (i'm just a novice amateur ) to do so ... but i enjoy this picture...what i see is a mixture of new and old .......modern concrete industrial with -- lets call em old fishing boats --- as a contrast. Just my thought ....

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    Re: Passing through a bridge

    Quote Originally Posted by MatthewWilliams View Post
    i dont comment a lot on others work, simply because i have no creditability (i'm just a novice amateur ) to do so ... but i enjoy this picture...what i see is a mixture of new and old .......modern concrete industrial with -- lets call em old fishing boats --- as a contrast. Just my thought ....
    ....Thanks for your kind words.

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    Tejal

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    Re: Passing through a bridge

    I like the angles and sundial effect. Nicely done!

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    Re: Passing through a bridge

    Quote Originally Posted by Texas Dave View Post
    I like the angles and sundial effect. Nicely done!
    Thanks David

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