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    A mother's treasure is her daughter !!

    A mother's treasure is her daughter !! This title always inspires me to capture such type of pictures .

    C&C are welcome.

    A mother's treasure is her daughter !!IMG_6357 by patel_tejal, on Flickr

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    Re: A mother's treasure is her daughter !!

    Nicely captured.

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    Re: A mother's treasure is her daughter !!

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nicely captured.
    Thanks John

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    Re: A mother's treasure is her daughter !!

    Tejal - to me, this image does not come up to the standard of your previous postings.

    1. You've cut the mother off at chest level. I don't think this works. I don't necessarily see the soft focus as an issue but I think the little girl heading to her mother might work better if both people were in focus.

    2. The child has her back to us. While photographing the back of people sometimes works, more often than not, it does not. I don't think it works all that well in this image.

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    Re: A mother's treasure is her daughter !!

    Tejal, I'll agree with Manfred here and think that if the mother had not been cut off it would have made a much stronger image. Not sure of the techs but it may have also been possible to get the mother more OOF.

    I do like the concept of the image very much.

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    Re: A mother's treasure is her daughter !!

    Thanks Manfred for your feedback. Very important things you have mentioned. I will be careful about all those next time.

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    Re: A mother's treasure is her daughter !!

    Quote Originally Posted by Stagecoach View Post
    Tejal, I'll agree with Manfred here and think that if the mother had not been cut off it would have made a much stronger image. Not sure of the techs but it may have also been possible to get the mother more OOF.

    I do like the concept of the image very much.
    Thanks Grahame !! Very valuable inputs i got from you all. I will surely be careful next time.

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