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    Re: Tilt

    I like the colours and contrast between the background and foreground but the composition does not work for me.

    P.S. You may have have cleaning job to do on your sensor (upper right in photo).

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    L. Paul,

    Thanks for the comments. Hopefully that was just raindrops.

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    Re: Tilt

    Actually LPaul if you look at it like you are looking at some art stuff, this one makes your head tilt to the side to mimic the direction of the flowers.

    Just want to ask, John...was this taken on a very windy day that is why you titled it "TILT"?

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    Quote Originally Posted by IzzieK View Post
    Actually LPaul if you look at it like you are looking at some art stuff, this one makes your head tilt to the side to mimic the direction of the flowers.

    Just want to ask, John...was this taken on a very windy day that is why you titled it "TILT"?
    Hi Izzie,

    Yes a very windy day. Thanks for commenting.

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    Interesting composition John. Have you considered cloning out the out of focus stem on the left BG as well as the OOF stems center BG? I think it may make for a better overall image.

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    Re: Tilt

    I liked the colors; yet the tilt looks permanent and not due to a wind....

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    Re: Tilt

    Quote Originally Posted by flashback View Post
    Interesting composition John. Have you considered cloning out the out of focus stem on the left BG as well as the OOF stems center BG? I think it may make for a better overall image.
    Jack,

    Thanks for the comments, I will give it an edit.

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    Re: Tilt

    Quote Originally Posted by Wavelength View Post
    I liked the colors; yet the tilt looks permanent and not due to a wind....
    Nandakumar,

    Thanks for the comments. Very strong wind.

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    Re: Tilt

    I loved the colors John May be a vertical frame with more BG would look better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    I loved the colors John May be a vertical frame with more BG would look better.
    Binnur,

    Thanks for commenting. Perhaps some floating farmhouses and cows ala the Wizard of Oz.

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    Re: Tilt

    Quote Originally Posted by flashback View Post
    Interesting composition John. Have you considered cloning out the out of focus stem on the left BG as well as the OOF stems center BG? I think it may make for a better overall image.
    Here is the edit.

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    John,

    Great color combination and light. I like the edit.

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    Re: Tilt

    Quote Originally Posted by ajsmith View Post
    John,

    Great color combination and light. I like the edit.
    Thanks Ali.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Here is the edit.

    Tilt
    John this one works for me. I do feel it's a better image now.

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    Re: Tilt

    Yes...! Very nice edit. Now you can put this one on your wall.

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    Re: Tilt

    Quote Originally Posted by flashback View Post
    John this one works for me. I do feel it's a better image now.
    Thanks Jack.

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    Re: Tilt

    Quote Originally Posted by IzzieK View Post
    Yes...! Very nice edit. Now you can put this one on your wall.
    Thanks Izzie, my friend has been challenging me to take more floral photographs; so she gets the honors.

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