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    Time for the WILD FAIRY IRIS again:

    Hope there is some improvement from the ones I posted last year.

    Any C&C will be regarded as helpful.

    Thanks for looking!

    Time for the WILD FAIRY IRIS again:

    EDIT: Sorry, posted the wrong image.
    Last edited by AB26; 12th September 2013 at 11:52 AM.

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    Re: Time for the WILD FAIRY IRIS again:

    I like your main subject but the secondary flower tends to pull the eye.
    Might look good if you had a third flower.

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    Re: Time for the WILD FAIRY IRIS again:

    Lovely...i think Boyer has a point there

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    Re: Time for the WILD FAIRY IRIS again:

    Possibly a tighter crop would reduce the impact from that second flower?

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    Re: Time for the WILD FAIRY IRIS again:

    Another way might be to shift the focus area a bit more to the FG. I would rather like to see the FG nice and sharp as you did here.

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    Re: Time for the WILD FAIRY IRIS again:

    Thank you all for the comments. I do take note and appreciate it.

    A tighter crop - any better?

    Time for the WILD FAIRY IRIS again:

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    Re: Time for the WILD FAIRY IRIS again:

    It does flow better.

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    Re: Time for the WILD FAIRY IRIS again:

    Sure

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