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    Fractured

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    I am feeling bombarded by information and important descisions that need making.

    This is simply an expression of that.

    Feel free to comment.

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    Re: Fractured

    Very nice use of pattern, texture, imagery.

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    Re: Fractured

    The first word that comes to my mind is "haunting."

    Consider toning down the very brightest part of the item in the top left corner, as that brightness is a little distracting. I realize that that's not the brightest part of the image, but it has that impact on me for whatever reason.

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    Re: Fractured

    Thanks John.

    Mike...do you mean the left outer corner edge?

    I totally agree..it actually detracts a lot from the bright 'cloudy bit' ( technical term that!! so will damp it down.

    Thanks Mike.

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    Sharon, the first thought that came to my mind when I saw this photo was a childhood lost. I thought of that when I saw the girl's face in what appears to be a magazine. The whole pic again reminds me of some dark place.


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    Re: Fractured

    Quote Originally Posted by Daisy Mae View Post
    Mike...do you mean the left outer corner edge?
    Yes. Your explanation is more accurately detailed than mine. You make a good mind reader.

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    Re: Fractured

    Great image. I agree with Mike's comment.

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    Re: Fractured

    Sharon, you did it again, taking us in our dark places! I agree that the light parts on top are distracting. It could be a square picture, eliminating the top part, and lighten the rest of the picture ever so slightly. Am I influence by Donald B&W square pics?
    I like very much the overall effect you have rendered.

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