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Thread: Imperfect - C & C please
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4th August 2013, 06:48 PM #1
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Imperfect - C & C please
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4th August 2013, 08:31 PM #2
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Re: Imperfect - C & C please
For me, Rico, background distraction is the problem here.
I would treat it more as a portrait shot and crop closer to remove as much background as possible.
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4th August 2013, 08:32 PM #3
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Re: Imperfect - C & C please
Hi Rico. Since you asked for C&C, I will let you know my thoughts. Focus and DOF look pretty good. The two key issues I have with the image are 1. The crop should be less wide- take some of the right and left off, and 2. The background is really bad and distracting due to the out of focus highlights everywhere. Next time, try to find a subject or angle that reduces background distractions.
edit- Geoff, you beat me to the punch, and on the same two points!
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