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    A piece of nature...

    Hi all,
    Just want to know how can it be improve?!

    A piece of nature...
    IMG_3510 by Meisam Tj., on Flickr

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    Re: A piece of nature...

    Your horizon is crooked...overall, it's just not an attractive scene. Sorry

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    Re: A piece of nature...

    Oh, thanks.
    I couldn't have better frame, many buildings were around, they were three (magic number) trees there, unfortunately!

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    Re: A piece of nature...

    Hi, Meisam

    I love tree shots and you seemed to perceive one of the important aspects of shooting them, that they need some isolation or separation form the background, be it space, color, shape, or texture.

    If your editing program allows, I think this shot might be improved with some overall exposure reduction, some cropping off the right side and foreground, highlight reduction in the sky, while maintaining some highlights on the larger tree. The uneven horizon may hardly be noticeable to you now but will drive you crazy later. I'll have a quick play with it in Lightroom. Let me know if you'd like to see it on this thread or as a PM. Tree shots are often more like a portrait, and don't necessarily need to follow the rule of thirds, they can often be centered.

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