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    Fisherman's shed

    Photo as I took it

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    Photo as I process.....am a bit disappointed. Somewhere along the way I created a bit of rings in the sky. Will have a go with it again, later. Does the composition work?

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    Re: Fisherman's shed

    I like both images, but I really like the black and white photo!!

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    Re: Fisherman's shed

    Quote Originally Posted by Nat View Post
    Does the composition work?
    Yes, but ..............!

    I think you'd have a lot of possibilities with the shed and the pier(s) going out into the water. As it is, I feel that bush gets in the way.

    Are you able to re-visit this location? If so, I wonder what options are opened up by moving to teh right. Can you obliterate the bush from view behind the shed and then have the shed and the pier(s)?

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    Re: Fisherman's shed

    Thank you Kathy and Donald. I will go back one day, it's not that far. I just thought the piers were too many and too distracting....LOL!

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    Re: Fisherman's shed

    Just fooling around, I shopped the shed over to the left a bit.

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    Re: Fisherman's shed

    Quote Originally Posted by Nat View Post
    Just fooling around, I shopped the shed over to the left a bit.

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    I like this view better!!

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    Re: Fisherman's shed

    Your B&W reworking, Nat, basically works but, for me, the shed is a little too central now. I think I would crop a little from the right side.

    And the ducks are slightly too close to the bottom edge.

    Moving the shed is an idea but personally speaking, I would still crop a little from the right and top.

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