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    White project

    so here is some of my project about white color that i mentioned last week
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    Re: White project

    Hi Tien,

    The first one works quite well - personally, I would have leveled the horizon/straightened the fence on both sides and the girl is a little centrally placed, but I like the wiggly shadow behind her

    #2 is good

    #3 is a good composition except the wide, dark dividing line up the centre of the picture is just too bold and continuous, even with the arm bridging the gap, it is too wide for me. If only the dust sheet was a bit further across to the cupboard/shelving unit.

    You have achieved a white theme though, so keep up the good work,

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    Re: White project

    Nothing for me to add over and above what Dave has said. #2 is the best from my perspective.

    Nice job on the white theme.

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    Re: White project

    Thanks Dave i never notice that dark line untill u mention it..=/
    @ Mal.. lol

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    Re: White project

    Nice pics. I really like No 3

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