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    Baby Come Back!

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year CiC!

    Picture of a family taking a walk by the river. Parhaps the daughter thought Mom and Dad were walking to slowly?

    C&C are welcome.

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    Baby Come Back!

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    Re: Baby Come Back!

    Hi Tono,
    For me the colors aren't very appealing, aside from the red coat! That's great. The family seems centered in the frame, which to me I don't like too much. Can you frame the photo so the subjects are lower and there is less blah foreground? Perhaps a little more to the top of the frame?
    Overall the composition is interesting - makes me wonder what exactly is going on - why is he running, what is the lady with the carriage doing, where is taht little kid going!?!?!??!

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    Re: Baby Come Back!

    Thanks for your suggestion Brian. In fact I was unsure about how to crop this one to have a balanced image. For a moment I thought the water in the center of the image would not work, but shifting it up brings too much uninteresting grass in the foreground as you have pointed out.

    Here is another try.

    Baby Come Back!

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    Re: Baby Come Back!

    I like this better. The proportions look more 'normal'.

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    Re: Baby Come Back!

    I agree the new crop is much better and I love the title !

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