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    My daughter and her new Bow.

    My daughter and her new Bow.

    Josh

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    Re: My daughter and her new Bow.

    Hi Josh,

    Pretty good timing there, although compositionally, perhaps shot slightly tighter or wider would be better; this has chopped the ankles and elbow making it look accidentally incomplete.

    I'd also like to see more of your shots level - its a problem I am sensitive to because I keep getting it wrong too
    It is easily corrected in PP though, as long as you shot with a little extra space around the subject.

    You do seem to achieve a good balance of ambient and fill flash in these archery series.

    Bows weren't like that when I did archery at school (4 decades ago).

    Cheers,

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    Re: My daughter and her new Bow.

    Nice timing to get that shot. I echo Dave's thoughts - perhaps try a landscape spot so you can catch the full arrow in flight and get all of your daughter in as well. A little bit of negative space on the right might help add to the shot by people wonder what there target is.

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