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    Re: Umbrella

    Hi Fernando,

    I like the concept of this one but the balance doesn't quite work for me. I think that the boardwalk needs to be in the centre of the frame, and perhaps a tad too much sky for me. The colour of the sky against the umbrella and sand is lovely though.

    I really like the silhouettes in the link though, some great work!

    Charlie.

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    Re: Umbrella

    I agree with Charlie - the colour contrasts are brilliant but the composition itself seems to be a bit unbalanced.

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    Re: Umbrella

    I like it, especially the rope shadows on the posts. Very 3-dimensional.

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