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    Kowhai - yellow

    yesterday there were pink and purple threads - today there is a yellow one
    The focus is not the greatest I think - it seems like I have managed to focus on the branches at the top of the flowers rather than on the lower flowers.

    Kowhai - yellow

    All feedback and comments gratefully received.

    thanks,
    Lexie

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    Re: Kowhai - yellow

    Quote Originally Posted by Lexie in NZ View Post
    it seems like I have managed to focus on the branches at the top of the flowers rather than on the lower flowers.
    But the plus point is that you have seen the 'problem' yourself. And that development of a critical eye is, I think, a crucial stage on the learnign curve.

    I know I still experience wanting one of my images to be so good that objective critical capability get's thrown out and I convince myself it's good. But in reality, when I look at it again......

    The other question I'd have about this one is whether all the shadow playing across the flowers detracts from the effectiveness fo the image?

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