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    First Touch . Mother & Son

    First Touch . Mother & Son
    First Touch . Mother & Son

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    Re: First Touch . Mother & Son

    Darren

    A lovely idea for an image and one that you have made to work well. A gorgeous intimacy.

    A couple of suggestions for you to consider:

    • The creation, in post-processing of a catchlight in the child's left eye. At the moment, we can see no detail in that eye
    • I feel you have far too much text. It is detracting from the strength of the image. I think one line of text in the border, if you want that, to give the image a title is more than enough. And, do you really need a signature logo in the image? Again, something unobtrusive in the border would suffice.

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