New crop, with Clarity removed from rockface, to smooth out texture and throw emphasis on blocks of colour, WB adjustment, curve adjustments, and slight vignette.
https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4736/...3632c98f_o.jpg
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New crop, with Clarity removed from rockface, to smooth out texture and throw emphasis on blocks of colour, WB adjustment, curve adjustments, and slight vignette.
https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4736/...3632c98f_o.jpg
I quite like this last version. A brilliant image You have to print this, get it on a wall somewhere so people can see it and not hidden in the hard drive.
I think images like these can often be improved by taking the "less is more" approach. I would do a severe crop of just the reflection, and boost the saturation a bit. i think this would look great printed large and hung on a wall.
Hi Janis, as you know I have trouble explaining with words so here's a picture. I took the mid tones down just a tad with a Luma curve. Upped the structure by 38. Added a very gentle circular vignette. Not saying this is better but it does offer a different view.
http://i65.tinypic.com/ify7pg.jpg
Thanks, Peter, but I don't think this image will bear further cropping. May have to do a re-shoot next summer. ;)
Thanks, Brian. I think you might have missed my latest edit?
Thanks, Trevor. I actually printed that last edit on my Canon. The colours came out pretty well, which suggests I didn't do a bad job of calibrating my monitor. Some definition was lost, though, that made me think I might want to re-visit my sharpening, if not the whole Clarity and Structure thing. He is not going to get it for Christmas, for sure, but maybe sometime in the New Year. Or, I may try to reshoot with the new full-frame and a higher shutter speed.
That I did. I like your redo