Porter - slightly different pp 2

I would like to see it with a little more light!

We'll the original was shot in front of a slatted security roller over a shop front, which was out of focus, grey and bland, so I wanted to try the low key look and bring out the subject's features a little more. The 2nd version was lightened a little, a little more light in the eye area and then given a slight tint through nik silver efex. The jury's still out!