Critique Requested

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Hello Doug. A very nice capture.

I would like to see some more of the wooden building. A HDR shot would be interesting there or at least opening the shadows a bit.

The composition is nice but although the forest is beautiful on its own with wonderful colours I would prefer an anchor point in it to keep my eye.

Hi Doug. You have framed the composition beautifully but there is not a single object within the frame, with the possibility of the twin trees, that I would call a 'subject'.

This would be outstanding, I suspect, if you had a horse and rider just beyond the open door? ...and as Mitos points out, it would be great if you could see more of the detail in the shadows.

Frank, I think the door frame of the bar is the subject, which leads to the forest which then becomes the subject.

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Originally Posted by lightdrunk

Frank, I think the door frame of the bar is the subject, which leads to the forest which then becomes the subject.

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If it works for you Doug, that is all that really matters. :D