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    Old Tree & The Moon and The Old Dirt Road

    Hi,

    I would like to share some of my pictures taken on the family farm in north Florida. Your comments and critiques are welcomed and appreciated.

    Rob

    Old Tree & The Moon and The Old Dirt Road

    Old Tree & The Moon and The Old Dirt Road

    Old Tree & The Moon and The Old Dirt Road

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    Re: Old Tree & The Moon and The Old Dirt Road

    Rob, Nice series. The first photo is it for me. Love the colors and the overall mysterious feel. Well done.

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    In the middle image I like how the tree seems to be trying to caress the moon. Although I'm not sure about the flare, it's so symetrically placed it tends to distracts the eye.

    Love the gradient colouration in the top image

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    Re: Old Tree & The Moon and The Old Dirt Road

    The first two show pleasing color & composition. I like them. Especially #1.

    The third immediately struck me as being too dark. It looks like it has the potential to be eye-catching but it still needs some work. The sunlit portions look properly exposed. Focus on lightening the shadows so we can see more of the scene.

    My $0.02.

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    Re: Old Tree & The Moon and The Old Dirt Road

    Love the colours in the first shot.

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    Re: Old Tree & The Moon and The Old Dirt Road

    Thanks to all,

    Brain, I will fiddle with #3 a little and post a new one if I think it’s better.

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    Re: Old Tree & The Moon and The Old Dirt Road

    Wow, there I said it again, but it had to be said. I agree with Brian on the third shot, just a bit more light in the shadows - not much just a tad. I would love to see all of these really large they are beautiful. Number 1 is my favourite the colours and compostition are beautiful

    Wendy

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