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    C&C on this portrait

    Hey there! I did a shoot recently and would love to hear your feedback and thoughts :)
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    rob marshall

    Re: C&C on this portrait

    I like this very much. An unusual portrait, which uses available matching symmetry (dress and the brick-work) to excellent effect. Love the colours too. I'd be very happy to have taken this. Well done. Only slight crticism - I'd take about 10% off the top. That bright area at the top tends to draw the eye away from the girl.

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    Re: C&C on this portrait

    Rob, thank you so much for the feedback! A crop to 11x14 for my portfolio should bring the top under control, possibly a -0.5EV gradient in LR too? Here's the 2nd edit...
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    rob marshall

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kellen View Post
    Rob, thank you so much for the feedback! A crop to 11x14 for my portfolio should bring the top under control, possibly a -0.5EV gradient in LR too? Here's the 2nd edit...
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    Yep, that's much better. Cracking!

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    Re: C&C on this portrait

    Quote Originally Posted by rob marshall View Post
    Yep, that's much better. Cracking!
    I agree with Rob, Perfect.

    A superb portrait and worthy of a place in anyone's portfolio.

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    Re: C&C on this portrait

    Thank you both!

    This is the original processing, it's come a long ways!
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    Last edited by Kellen; 23rd April 2011 at 06:36 AM.

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