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    warm sand, c&c please

    Hello, any comments anyone?? cropping needed? else ?


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    warm sand, c&c please

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    Re: warm sand, c&c please

    On #1, I would probably recommend cloning out the leaf on the front and the one at the top right. For both images, I think this would work best on a black and white rendition. I like your concept here, Mariejo. The color doesn't seem to complement the shot that is why I am recommending a black and white option. Hope this helps.

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    Re: warm sand, c&c please

    Marie Josee

    I would agree with Willie. The pattern of the sand is very strong in its own right.

    Is this a place where you can re-visit to shoot again? Lots of potential. I would be tempted to go for just patterns of sand; i.e. not including any of the grass or its shadows.

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    Re: warm sand, c&c please

    oh...Not a place I go often...that was shoot during my vacation in Cuba...I was looking at sand when I saw that COULD be really nice to shoot...I am surely going to try it again, or something similar next time !!! thanks for your comments...MJ

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    Re: warm sand, c&c please

    I like the sand pattern and texture....agree with Jiro on the out of focus elements.

    Chuck

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