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    More practice

    5. FLAG
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    6.POSTED
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    7.RIVER FACTORY
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    Re: More practice

    That swan is still a bit soft. Getting a good focus on a scene like this is never easy.

    I think I would crop 'Posted' a bit tighter on the left side. Possibly change the size ratio to 5 x 4 ratio

    The river scene is excellent.

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    Re: More practice

    That was the same swan-wrong picture- i replaced it with the correct one
    sorry

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    Re: More practice

    I like these three. Is the River Factory straight?

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    Re: More practice

    That is a lot better, Gerald. The flag shot is also good.

    Possibly a very slight anti clockwise rotation for the river building; but it is very slight.

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