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7th February 2011, 06:37 AM
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water and palms
I liked the flat colours in this scene. I used a long exposure to flatten out the water. This was taken a little after sunset when you get that second wash of light...
Very interested if people think I could do more PS work on the water? Its looking a bit so so in the foreground. I considered cropping a little off the bottom, but I like the current composition. I am very happy to hear any suggestions to improve that or general critique. Anyway I will probably do a bit more correction work on the full file.
5D, 50mm 1.4, ISO 50, f22, 30 sec,
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7th February 2011, 04:25 PM
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Re: water and palms
Unless not palm trees are the important object on a photo? It would be better to lower them. To place them below, opening more the sky. Or to displace them closer to the center on one-third
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8th February 2011, 10:26 AM
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Re: water and palms
Yegor, thanks for the comments.
The trees are not essential focul points it is more of a colour canvas really. But apparently not so interesting
Thirds is ok in many shots but I like to try some different compositions.
tx neil
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8th February 2011, 03:22 PM
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Re: water and palms
I could easily see this image as the cover for a photo book with the title in a bold and contrasting color over the water.
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