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    Found in the Garden

    Found in the Garden
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    Found in the Garden
    Fuchsie2 by Tobias Weber, on Flickr

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    Re: Found in the Garden

    Hi Tobias,

    I think these are all good subjects, but for one reason or another, it is the backgrounds/composition/cropping that lets them down.

    #1 (pink/white) could be cleaned up by cloning out quite a few untidy bits.

    #2 (yellow), the subject is just too centrally placed.

    #3 (red/white) is cropped too tightly, I want to see a bit more to the right (and maybe less on the left)

    That's a shame because focus, exposure and saturation are quite good, in particular, the colours look natural.

    Hope that helps,

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