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11th January 2011, 05:18 PM
Hi guys, this is my first time to try shooting some flowers under artificial light. I still can't go out due to cold weather so I have to find a way to amuse myself inside the house. Any C&C would be most welcome!
Growth by jiro bau, on Flickr
Thank you very much for viewing!
Nikon D70, 50mm f1.8D lens, Exposure set at f16 at 1.6 seconds. 1 single 60 watts incandescent bulb used with a light handkerchief cover to soften the shadows. RAW to Jpeg conversion and processing via ACDSEE Pro.
11th January 2011, 05:45 PM
Is that a fabric that the flower is laying upon? One thougth is that it's a bit too indistinct, as I found myself trying to work out what it was, rather than concentrating on the image as a whole. So maybe it needs more light to make it clear what it is, or the background needs to go completely to black.
The lighting on the flower itself works very well. It is very well processed and certainly 'pops'.
11th January 2011, 05:58 PM
A lovely photograph, but I agree the background is a distraction.
I am curious. Why F16 and such a long exposure?
My Nikon 50mm F1.8 is pretty much stuck on F5.6 because the image is so good at that aperture.
11th January 2011, 06:13 PM
Yup, it's fabric. Too many distracting elements on the flower pot so I decided to cover it with a tulle type of fabric. You know, still "experimenting". Hehehe. I tried it to go completely black and it looks too artificial to me. I'll just probably extract the whole flower and put it in a new background later. Thanks a lot for the feedback, Donald. I really appreciate it!
11th January 2011, 06:15 PM
Hey Pete, thanks for the feedback. I'm trying to put every part of the flower in focus that is why the f16 opening. Still trying to experiment on a lot of stuff with this shot. I'll change the background later. Thanks a lot, guys! I really appreciate this kind of feedback.
Originally Posted by MixedHerbs
11th January 2011, 07:25 PM
Hi Jiro (I note some are now calling you Willie - is there another name we can dress you by?)
Nice exposure and colour. I agree about the fabric but to me its more about the highlights. I don't mind the idea of some fabric/texture flowing underneath. I hope you can get out soon and the arthritis settles down.
11th January 2011, 07:53 PM
11th January 2011, 09:31 PM
2nd revision. Does this looks "better"?
Thanks for the feedback, guys.
11th January 2011, 09:33 PM
I like this one much better Jiro.
11th January 2011, 09:35 PM
Thanks a lot, Paul! I appreciate your comment.
11th January 2011, 09:47 PM
Not that it is not exposed correctly...I am quite sure it is...but even so, I think the green-yellow in the stem almost overpowers the subtle, yet powerful reds and good solid yellow on the upper right leaf. I think I would tone that part down just a little but not so much as to lose its snap...and that should be fun.
11th January 2011, 09:56 PM
Good observation there, Chris. I'll try to adjust it and see how it affects the image. Thanks a lot!
11th January 2011, 10:41 PM
Chris, does this look "OK" now?
Growth3 by jiro bau, on Flickr
12th January 2011, 12:28 AM
I am thinking it is now "too" green. The image below doesn't do the image justice but it is too small to work much beyond what I am sending...it is sorta-kinda closer to where I would go...but if you judge my track record in competitions, I might not be the best judge of what's good.
It would even be good if the very bottom part of the stem could just shadow bleed into the background.
12th January 2011, 12:43 AM
Yeah, I see the subtle changes a little bit. Not to noticeable but I think I can see it. Oh my, these 8 cups of coffee must be messing up my eyesight now. LOL! I'll give it another shot re the stem. Thanks! I like this, I am learning.
12th January 2011, 01:03 AM
I like your second version.
How far is the cutting from the lens? And how "thick" is it?
A Depth Of Field utility you may find useful is here:
Try taking the same photograph but at different apertures. You can then cherry-pick the one that exploits the lens's abilities. The Nikon 50mm F1.8 can do amazing things.
12th January 2011, 01:47 AM
Hey, Peter, that was an awesome link. Thanks!
I tested it using the setup that I did on the poinsettia and I am only 1 full stop over to the desired depth of field required. I set it up at f16 and the program recommends an f11 opening. Not bad for an amateur, eh.
12th January 2011, 02:03 AM
That link was more math than I've done since high school...but I am using it in class tomorrow to give my math hoodlums a way to share a skill level I can't possibly explain (well, not that way).
As per the hyperfocal distance, I almost always bracket my exposures to at least make an attempt at ensuring the perfect f/stop. If it is a ho-hum shot, I may only give it one stop on either side, but if I really want the shot, I go a lot on either side. In film, I would do the desired f/stop, and then go in increments of 1/2 stop in both directions at least two full stops. Film was cheaper than trying to get back to a same location, set up, shoot and process..again.
12th January 2011, 02:44 AM
Thanks Peter, I have seen a number of these sites but I like the diagrams and can use this with my students.
I did download a good version from this site but I notice they now want to charge $10. A very good version if you want it on your computer.