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    Wood pattern, let me your comments

    Please, let me know the comments of community CiC about the picture below:

    Wood pattern, let me your comments

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    Re: Wood pattern, let me your comments

    Looks very interesting, Deilton. Perhaps you could add some sharpening and a little work on the contrast to make it more eye-catchy? I believe if you locate the intersection of all those bamboo trusses on the 1/3 power point location top left that would make your image stronger. Just a suggestion, Sir. A very pretty interesting subject and POV in my opinion.
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    Re: Wood pattern, let me your comments

    Hi Deilton,

    I agree with Jiro; I might add that the lack of contrast at the top of frame looks like lens veiling flare - if no lens hood was available, (in hindsight) shielding the lens from the side lighting would have been wise. Easy for me to say after the event though

    Not that I'm acusing you of anything, but it might be worth checking if front element of lens is clean.

    It probably would sharpen up a bit, but you were obviously careful with the 1/4 second exposure not to move the camera, well done.

    It is an interesting shot though, what/where is it?

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    Re: Wood pattern, let me your comments

    Thanks for your comments.

    Really, I agree regarding to sharpen and top constrast, and would expect about these topics.
    There was a lamp on side lighting, maybe the best way would be to take picture more closer and centered on the top.

    Ah, this is a roof in a cafeteria area. On outside area, this roof has a shape like a mexican hat, even though this park stays in Brazil.

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