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    A couple of shots for your critque and comments

    Bumblebee and a butterfly

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    Re: A couple of shots for your critque and comments

    Roger

    The first one looks to be the pick of the pair. I think, on the second one, it is unclear what the subject is. The wing of the bee is beautifully in focus, but the whole image lacks a clear central focal point. I think there's too much foliage etc all around.

    On the other hand, there's no doubting what the purpose of the first one is -the subject is prominent. That a good image. You captured it very well.

    It would be good to get them posted inline at a larger size. Have a read here and this should help you with posting images. If not, SHOUT and someone will come in to help.

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    Re: A couple of shots for your critque and comments

    I to like the first one the best. Just a couple of thoughts... it might have looked even better if it were a portrait orientation, and second I think the white balance is just a little cool. I miss getting butterfly shots, all of ours are gone for the season

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