town in singapore

[nyiyaz]

comment pls..

[David]

Hi Nyiyaz - The first image shows pleasing symmetry, but may need a slight crop at the bottom right. The third image looks as if it has a depth of field problem, but maybe that's what you want. I quite like the semi-abstract quality. Similarly, the second image is slightly out of focus for the near elements of the flowers and leaves. With the third image, it would be interesting to take a series of shots with different DoF's and combine them to give a full sharp image. Just some thoughts.

David

[nyiyaz]

thanks david.. i'll improve on the secong and third picture.

hw abt this? updated..

[David]

Much neater!

David