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    What Lies Yonder?

    C&C welcome.

    What Lies Yonder?

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    Re: What Lies Yonder?

    Very nice Ashish

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    Re: What Lies Yonder?

    Good exposure, nice colors, you could improve shape horizontal and vertical lines inside LR or PS.....or DXO etc. (transform tools) of course if you have one of them

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    Re: What Lies Yonder?

    Quote Originally Posted by bje07 View Post
    Good exposure, nice colors, you could improve shape horizontal and vertical lines inside LR or PS.....or DXO etc. (transform tools) of course if you have one of them
    +1. You could pull the top line of the window up a bit but it's a very nice image as it stands. I like the title as well.

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    Re: What Lies Yonder?

    Nice image, the boy in the BG is a plus for me.

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    Re: What Lies Yonder?

    I'm not so worried by the shape being 'out' a bit.

    I was going to suggest a small rotation, but when I checked, you already have the centre bars (H & V) parallel to edges. (so don't change it)

    I like the brother (I assume) peeking out behind her.
    The emptiness on the right is unfortunate, but there's nothing to be done with it, it does at least convey they live without all the modern technical paraphernalia most of us consider normal.

    I don't know how you managed to capture her not looking at you, but it works well with the title.

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    Re: What Lies Yonder?

    Nice, resembles a diptych. Nice color scheme.

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    Re: What Lies Yonder?

    I like it. The colours are great. The empty space RHS works for me in that it tells a story.
    Cheers Ole

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    Re: What Lies Yonder?

    Thank you all for commenting!

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    Re: What Lies Yonder?

    Quote Originally Posted by bje07 View Post
    Good exposure, nice colors, you could improve shape horizontal and vertical lines inside LR or PS.....or DXO etc. (transform tools) of course if you have one of them
    Thanks for your thoughts Jean... The windows are not perfect rectangles and the bars are also not level. However, I have tried to align the vertical bar.

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